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Today was busy Today, our university did an entrance ceremony, there I explained about economics class as a good student. I was very nervous when I stood in front of about one hundred students. I felt bad for my speech. But our teacher said me the speech was good. I was glad and got motivation. I will try new things.

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Today was busy

Today, our university did had an entrance ceremony and I was there as a good student to I explained explain about my economics class. as a good student. I was very nervous when I stood in front of about one hundred students. and I felt bad about for my speech. but our teacher said told me that the speech was good. I was glad and got motivation motivated. I will to try new things.

'Today our university had an entrance ceremony and I was there as a good student to explain about my economics class. I was very nervous when I stood in front of about one hundred students and felt bad about my speech but our teacher told me that the speech was good. I was glad and got motivated to try new things.'


Yushi your English is very good but you should try to use more complex sentences using 'and' or 'but' to connect sentences together so that your writing flows better when reading. You also do not need to start a new line for every sentence, you just need a space after each full stop or period (.). I know this probably isn't easy for a none English speaker but keep up the good work.

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Today was a busy day.

Today our university had an entrance ceremony, and there as a good student, I explained about my economics class. as a good student.
I was very nervous when I stood in front of about one hundred students.
I felt bad about my speech. But our teacher told me that the speech was good.
I was glad and I got motivation.
I will try new things.

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