The Camino of Santiago
The first stage Two years ago I started my journey inside the Camino de Santiago. An unfinished path yet but a journey that started an inner transformation. You may think I'm an little bit arrogant but Im not lying. At the beginning of the path I haven't any spectation about an inner change but when you start sharing your space with unkown people, when you look at those faces for the first time, you know it's not about a long trip through the mountains, through the little villages lost in the countryside. That people, maybe not all of them like me, have begun a pilgrimage to take up themselves again, to face new situations, new challenges in their life. They've stopped everything and have started to listening, asking themselves. That first night you see all those faces and think where you are, why you are there. The next morning you wake up early. The sun is not rise yet and you walk in silence or maybe have a little chat with you friend about how it was the previous night in the basement of the Colegiata. Until you arrive at the goal of your first stage. At midday the hostel is still closed and you sit on the floor and wait. Soon the other pilgrim arrive, you're going to share the room with some of them and a few will become a little family during the journey. A very special relationship that have place only in the Camino or, perhaps if you finish it together and have the chance to find the right family, they will become a family forever. That afternoon we have met a pretty nice group to share our little journey with. A girl from Argentina, another one from Lituania, one guy from Spain and the majority of them from Italia. The Camino was full of Italians, sometimes we make fun of who was in Italy if all of them were there. That night we cooked, drank and laughed together. That night was the best night of the entire journey because we simply find out ourselves.
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The Camino of Santiago
The first stage Two years ago, (comma reqd.) I started my journey inside along ('inside' implies being in a structure. 'along' is probably better, as the Camino is a long journey.) the Camino de Santiago. It's still An unfinished path yet but a journey that started an inner transformation. (There was no verb.) You may think I'm an little bit arrogant, (comma) but Im I'm not lying. At the beginning of the path, (comma) I haven't any spectation about I didn't suspect an inner change, (comma) but when you start sharing your space with unknown people, when you look at those faces for the first time, you know it's not about a long trip through the mountains, through the little villages lost in the countryside. That Those (people is almost always plural) people, maybe not all of them like me, have begun a pilgrimage to take up find (unclear, guessed with 'find') themselves again, to face new situations, new challenges in their life. They've stopped everything and have started to listening listen, asking themselves. That first night, (comma) you see all those faces and think wonder (*) where you are, why you are there. The next morning, (comma) you wake up early. The sun is not rise hasn't risen yet, (comma) and you walk in silence or maybe have a little chat with you your friend about how it was the previous night in the basement of the Colegiata. Until you arrive at the goal of your first stage. (*) At midday, (comma) the hostel is still closed, (comma) and you sit on the floor and wait. Soon the other pilgrims arrive, you're You're going to share the room with some of them, (comma) and a few will become a little family during the journey. A very special relationship that have place happens only in the Camino (*) or, perhaps if you finish it together and have the chance to find the right family, they will become a family forever. That afternoon we have met a pretty nice group to share our little journey with. A girl from Argentina, another one from Lituania (in English, Lithuania), one guy from Spain and the majority of them from Italia (in English, Italy). The Camino was full of Italians, sometimes . Sometimes we make fun of who was left in Italy if all of them were there. That night we cooked, drank, (optional comma) and laughed together. That night was the best night of the entire journey because we simply find out discovered ourselves.0
The Camino de Santiago*
The first stageTwo years ago I started my journey inside on/along the Camino de Santiago. It's still an unfinished path yet but it's a journey that started an inner transformation. You may think I'm an little bit arrogant but I'm not lying.
At the beginning of the path I haven't didn't have any expectations about of an inner change but when you start sharing your space with unknown people strangers, when you look at those faces for the first time, you know it's not about a long trip through the mountains, through the little villages lost in the countryside. Those people, maybe not all of them like me, have begun a pilgrimage to take up themselves again, to face new situations, new challenges in their lives. They've stopped everything and have started to listening, asking themselves. That first night you see all those faces and think about where you are, and why you are there.
The next morning you wake up early. The sun is not rise up yet and you walk in silence or maybe have a little chat with your friend about how it was the previous night in the basement of the Colegiata. Until you arrive at the goal of your first stage. At midday the hostel is still closed and you sit on the floor and wait. Soon the other pilgrims arrive. You're going to share the room with some of them and a few will become a little family during the journey. A very special relationship that have place only happens on the Camino or, perhaps if you finish it together and have the chance to find the right family, they will may/might become a family forever.
That afternoon we have met a pretty nice group to share our little journey with. A girl from Argentina, another one from Lithuania, one guy from Spain and the majority of them from Italy. The Camino was full of Italians, sometimes we made fun of a joke about who was left in Italy if all of them were there. That night we cooked, drank and laughed together. That night was the best night of the entire journey because we simply found out ourselves.
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* In English, the names of places are usually left in the original language, like "Santiago de Chile" or "El Camino Real".
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