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About Task1 in IELTS Could anyone help correct my Task1 in IELTS and give suggestions for my grammars and structure! Many thanks! ------------------------------------------------------ A quick glance at the graph shows the ratio of British students who speak various languages at a certain university in United Kingdom between 2000 and 2010. At the first pie chart, the ratio of students who speak Spanish is ranked first standing at 30% of British students, which were the most popular foreign language in UK by the year 2000. Moreover, the percentage of French and another language occupied 2nd with a mere 10% of UK students. In addition, students who can speak two other languages and German are in 3rd position. However, the least UK students tend to learn two other languages, which was in a relatively low proportion in 10%. From the information supplied from the second chart, the ratio of foreign languages such as French, Spanish and two other languages rose steady in the year 2010 while the percentage of German had hardly any change. Nevertheless, compared with the two charts, the percentage of students who do not speak any other language decreased markedly during the period from 2000 to 2010 as a whole and there was a corresponding increase in the ration of Spanish and two other languages. In conclusion, as we can see, the ratio of no other language in 2000 is about 2 times as high as that in 2010.

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