Animal Testing
Animals had been used in experimentation for many decades; this caused a lot of controversy in society. Some people argue that animal experimentation is a necessity, while others believe it should be banned altogether. This essay will highlight advantages and disadvantages of this issue.
On the one hand, people who support the use of animals for testing claim that this is the only successful way for discovering new drugs. Over the years, scientists used animals for testing new drugs, which created an evolution in the field of pharmacology. Thanks to these experiments, now we have treatments for many diseases such as diabetes, hypertension, and cardiac diseases. Proponents of animal testing opine that it is unethical to test new drugs directly on humans, as this may lead to serious harm.
On the other hand, opponents of animal testing believe that using animals for these purposes is cruel and inhumane they add that animals are living beings, just like humans have their own sensations and feelings. Animal welfare activists claim that animals are treated and killed in a brutal way during these experiments without mercy. With breakthroughs in technology innovations, some believe that computerized robots can be used instead, yet, this still needs more research.
In conclusion, animal experimentation will continue to be a contentious issue for a while; as long as no suitable alternatives appear. In my opinion, the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of animal testing, but strict policies should be instructed to guarantee a humane way of dealing with these animals.
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Animal Testing
Animals were used in experimentation for many decades; this caused a lot of controversy in society [1]. Some people argue that animal experimentation is a necessity, while others believe it should be banned altogether. This essay will highlight the advantages and disadvantages of this issue.On the one hand, people who support the use of animals for testing claim that this is the only successful way to discover new drugs. For [2] years, scientists used animals for testing new drugs, which helped the field of pharmacology advance. Thanks to these experiments, now we have treatments for many diseases such as diabetes, hypertension, and cardiac diseases. Proponents of animal testing opine that it is unethical to test new drugs directly on humans, as this may lead to serious harm.
On the other hand, opponents of animal testing believe that using animals for these purposes is cruel and inhumane. They add that animals are living beings, just like humans, and have their own sensations and feelings. Animal welfare activists claim that animals are treated and killed in a brutal way during these merciless/ruthless experiments. With breakthroughs in technological innovations, some believe that computerized robots could be used instead, yet this still needs more research [or: but more research is necessary].
In conclusion, animal experimentation will continue to be a contentious issue for a while, as long as no suitable alternatives appear [3]. In my opinion, the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of animal testing, but strict policies should be implemented to guarantee a humane way of dealing with these animals.
[1] Many people dislike "in society" or other references to "society" unless it is accompanied by an explanation of what society you are talking about (for example, someone might say, "In the past, such and such was common, but in Modern American society, that practice is no longer widespread").
[2] "Over the years" is most often used when talking about changes over time
[3] This isn't incorrect, but the meaning isn't immediately obvious. I would recommend avoiding the negation by saying "until a suitable alternative is found"
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