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2018/3/31 I went to the park near my house because of "HANAMI"."HANAMI" is the Japanese traditional banquet or party with looking at the cherry blossom.Now, they are opening completely and very beautiful. I proud of them. Moreover, there are lots street stalls. However, actually I went myself and neither ate anything nor drunk. I just read the book under the cherry blossom for two hours.I really enjoyed.

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2018/3/31

I went to the park near my house for "HANAMI"."HANAMI" is the traditional Japanese* banquet or party for looking at the cherry blossom.Now, they are opening completely and are very beautiful. I am proud of them. There are also** lots of street stalls.

However, actually I went by myself and neither ate nor drank anything. I just read a book under the cherry blossom for two hours.I really enjoyed it.***

*when using an adjective of nationality, always put the other adjective first

**I would say 'also' instead of 'moreover'. 'Moreover' is quite formal and does not work when you are simply describing two different things. 

***you could also say 'enjoyed myself' 

Hope this helps! 

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2018/3/31

I went to the park near my house because of "HANAMI"."HANAMI" is the Japanese traditional banquet or party where we look at the cherry blossom. Now, they are opening completely and are very beautiful. I'm proud of them. Moreover, there are lots street stalls.
However, I actually went myself and neither ate anything nor drunk. I just read a book under the cherry blossom for two hours. I really enjoyed it.


Sounds like a lovely day! ;)

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