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Sophia
A horrible journey on the ocean. I had a horrible ship journey on oceans today, the Northeast Monsoon triggered the crazy waves, so we were basically taking a pirate ship for nearly THREE hours! I was quite fine in the previous one hour but, after that, I totally lost my balance system, I was deeply seasick! I threw up three times until nothing else but bile can be spit out from my stomach. I was living in hell and wishing for a second that someone can just shoot me down.

Wish me a better luck on my way back! I can really use the phrase “Godspeed.”

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A horrible journey on the ocean.

I had a horrible boat trip on the ocean today. The Northeast Monsoon triggered the crazy waves, so we were basically on a pirate ship for nearly THREE hours! I was quite fine for the first hour but, after that, my entire balance system was messed up. I was terribly seasick! I threw up three times, until nothing else but bile could come out of my stomach. I was living in hell and wishing for a second that someone can just shoot me down.

Wish me a better luck on my way back! I can really use the phrase “Godspeed.”


What a trip! I hope all is well now :)

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A horrible journey on the ocean.

I had a horrible voyage on the ocean today. The Northeast Monsoon triggered crazy waves, so we were basically sailing a pirate ship for nearly THREE hours! I was quite fine for the first hour but, after that, I totally lost my equilibrium, and was deeply seasick! I threw up three times until nothing else but bile could be spat out from my stomach. I was living in hell and wished for a second that someone could just come and shoot me.

Wish me better luck on my way back! I can really use “Godspeed.”

Very well written! Bon voyage!

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A horrible journey to the ocean.

I had a horrible ship journey to the ocean today, the Northeast Monsoon triggered the crazy waves, so we were basically taking  sailing a pirate ship for nearly THREE hours! I was quite fine in the previous one hour but, after that, I totally lost my balance system, I was deeply seasick! I threw up three times until nothing else but bile can be spit came out from  of my stomach. I was living in hell and was wishing for a second that  someone can  would just shoot me down.

Wish me a better luck on my way back! I can really use  need the phrase “Godspeed.”

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