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Hello everyone. I would like to tell you about my little motherland and improve my English. Hello again! My name is Roman, I'm 24. I'm living in Russia, Vladimir city.Vladimir located in western side of Russian Federation,about 200 km from Moscow. It is not big city and population about 360000 people. However it is very old and historical city. Many years ago Vladimir was the capital of Russian kingdom. Vladimir was build in 990 year and citizens of this city were seeing Tartar Mongol Yoke, unification of Russian principalities, Polish–Russian Wars, Napoleonic Wars,end of Rurik and Romanov dynasties and many more. So as for me, I'm looking to improve my English skills. If you interested i can help u with Russian. Thank you for your attention

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Hello everyone. I would like to tell you about my little motherland and improve my English.

Hello again! My name is Roman and I'm 24. I live in the city of Vladimir, in Russia. Vladimir is located on the western side of the Russian Federation, about 200 km from Moscow. It is not a big city and has population about 360,000 people. However, it is  a very old and historical city. Many years ago, Vladimir was the capital of the kingdom of Russian. Vladimir was built in the year 990 AD, and citizens of this city witnessed the Mongol-Tartar Yoke, the unification of Russian principalities, the Polish–Russian Wars, the Napoleonic Wars, the end of the Rurik and Romanov dynasties and much more.


So as for me, I'm looking to improve my English skills. If you are interested, I can help you with Russian.
Thank you for your attention

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Hello everyone. I would like to tell you about my little motherland and improve my English.

Hello again! My name is Roman, I'm 24. I live in Vladimir, Russia.Vladimir is located on the western side of the Russian Federation, about 200 km from Moscow. It is not big city and its population is about 360,000 people. However it is a very old and historical city. Many years ago Vladimir was the capital of the Russian kingdom. Vladimir was built in the year 990 and citizens of this city experienced the Tatar-Mongol Yoke, unification of Russian principalities, Polish–Russian Wars, Napoleonic Wars, the end of the Rurik and Romanov dynasties and much more.
So as for me, I'm looking to improve my English skills. If you're interested I can help you with Russian.
Thank you for your attention


The English here is very good and easy to read and understand. There are just a few changes to make it sound more natural.

You can also say: "It's not a big city and it has a population of 360,000 people". It sounds the same as your sentence.

"Citizens of this city were seeing.." doesn't really work, but you can use a lot of other phrases like "Citizens of this city experienced...", "Citizens of this city went through...", or "Citizens of this city saw first-hand...".


I'm happy to help you with English more and also would like to improve my Russian if you ever have time!

Kevin


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