Five a day (check my mistakes please)
I've being exiled to a private island, and my captors will
only supply me with five foods. What do I pick?
This is a very hard question because I really like to eating. But I want to try to pick them.
The first one is spaghetti with stake. Or it's a two food? Anyway if they are together it's really delicious and high-caloriе.
The second (or third?) is banana. I don't know why but I totally like them.
The third one is mandarin (about three kilos per day). It's a my favourite fruit.
The fourth is an ice-cream. If I will be in private island it'll be a warm place. So I'll really need some cold food.
And the last one is croissant. Just for sweet tooth side of me.
My choosing time was a much longer then time that I had for writing but it worth it.
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Five a day (check my mistakes please)
I've being been exiled to a private island, and my captors will only supply me with five foods. What do I pick?This is a very hard question because I really like to eating eat. But I want to try to pick them.
The first one is spaghetti with stake steak. Or it's a is that two food foods? Anyway if they are together it's really delicious and high-caloriе.
The second (or third?) is banana. I don't know why but I totally (or really) like them.
The third one is mandarin (about three kilos per day). It's a my favourite fruit.
The fourth is an ice-cream. If I will be in a private island it'll be a warm place. So I'll really need some cold food.
And the last one is croissant. Just for my sweet tooth side of me.
My choosing time choosing was a much longer then than the time that I had for writing but it was worth it.
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Five a day (check my mistakes please)
I've being exiled to a private island, and my captors will only supply me with five foods. Which do I pick? *(It would be better to say "Which should I pick?")*
This is a very hard question, because I really like eating. But I want to try to pick them.
The first one is spaghetti with steak. Or is that two foods? Anyway, if they are together it's really delicious and high-calorie.
The second (or third?) is banana. I don't know why, but I totally like them.
The third one is mandarin oranges (about three kilos per day). It's my favourite fruit.
The fourth is ice-cream. If I will be on private island it'll be a warm place, so I'll really need some cold food.
And the last one is croissants. Just for the sweet tooth side of me.
My choosing time was a much longer then the time that I had for writing but it was worth it.
Good job! Writing is an awesome way to practice.
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