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i feel hurt oh, my god. i have eaten a lot of things today and i am so full now. for many people ,if you eat a lot of things you like ,you probably are very happy. However, i will feel very sad after eating a lot of things.Because so many relatives say i am fat than ever before everytimes they met me ,i really want to put off some weight.Unluckily everytimes i said i want to lose weight ,my parents would say who say you are fat and my classmates would say "come on, you are not fat.' it seems that if i try to lose weight ,they will blame me or can't understant me. i did remember i met a lot of relatives at my brother's widding, and my relatives all say that'wow, adelines, you looked so different as they way you were' and i knew that they want to say "wow,you are so fat' and i know that i must put off some weight but i find that it was so hard. i lack of self control and i like eating so much ,just like today. oh,everytime i eat so much and i didn't fell so well,i will fell regret................. i want to cry...wuwuwuwuwu

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are u kidding ,khan. you ask me to be ran by a dog. it is so funny.do u like that way to lose weight . i have never tried this way to put off weight and i still don't want to try now or in the future.,so i don't know whether it work or not. i have one qustion want to ask u ,khan, from your picture, i found that u are fatter than me,,maybe you should try the way you suggested to lose weight. when you have experienced, please just let me know whether it work or not and send me a picture that i can know it really work or not. good luck , khan. thanks ,khan.i don't know whether it is good way or not, but i wouldn't introduce this way to other people who want to lose weight except u. maybe u really like this way .ok ,no judgement. i hope that u can lose ur weight later.
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i guess first u should build up a strong motivation for loosing weight, and make sure that u are doing this not just to please your relatives, or in the fear of public condemn or something, but for your charming self=) I am sure that if your decision to loose some weight has reasonable basis , it will be eventually accepted by your parents and friends.Just be firm in accomplishing your aim and don't go overboard or too far. Probably your friends are right and u are not fat at all, think about it. I guess you should combine keeping to the diet with some physical exercises (jogging, cycling,gym training) . Burn more calories than u consume and that would be enough to loose weight quickly and effectively... abstain from 消夜 =)...Good luck
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i feel hurt

oh my god, i have eaten a lot of things so much today and i am so full now. For many people of you, if you eat a lot of things you like you probably are very feel very happy. However, i will feel very sad after eating a lot of things because so many of my relatives call me fat. than ever before everytimes they meet me and after listening to them i really feel that i need to want to put off some weight. Unluckily everytime i said say that i want to loose my weight my parents would say who says you are fat and my classmates would say "come on, you are not fat'..' It seems to me that if i try to loose some weight they will blame me as if they or can't understant how i feel about it.me. 

i did remember i metmeeting a lot of my relatives at my brother's widding wedding and my relatives all saying that "wow adelines, you looked so different as they way you were' and i knew that they wanted to say "wow, you are so fat".
And i know that i must put off some weight but i find that it to be was so hard. i My lack of self control and i like my love of eating so much ,just like today are the reason why i can't put off my weight. oh, everytime i eat, i eat just like today and then i would later on regret for eating so much.  so much and i didn't fell so well,i will fell regret................. i want to cry...wuwuwuwuwu

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Great response and ideas. Description is very detailed and interesting to read. There are few grammatical errors and spelling mistakes. Consider the following:

I Feel Hurt

Oh, my God! I have eaten a lot of things today and I am so full now. For many people, if you eat a lot of things that you like, you probably would be very happy. However, I would feel very sad after eating a lot of things as many of my relatives say i am fat than ever before everytimes they meet me. I really want to put off some weight. Unluckily Unfortunately everytimes I say I want to lose weight, my parents would say 'who says you are fat' and my classmates would say 'come on, you are not fat'. It seems that if I try to lose weight, my parents blame me or can't don't understand me.
I did remember that I met a lot of my relatives at my brother's wedding, and my relatives all say said that 'wow, Adelines, you looked so different as they way from what you were before' and I know that they want to say 'wow,you are so fat'. I know that I must put off some weight but I find that it was is so hard. I totally lack of self control and I like eating so much, just like the way I did today. Oh, every time I eat so much and I didn't fell don't feel so well. I always will fell regret afterwards................. I really want to cry...wuwuwuwuwu

Hope it helps. Compare it with your own passage and identify the errors. Happy learning. Regards. 

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It doesn't sound like you are fat Adelines. Do you like how you look? It matters how you feel not how other people see you. Maybe some of your friends like to see you thinner (because it suits you) and maybe some of them like to see you a bit fatter (because to them it looks healthy). You can't please everyone. It's a personal thing. Eating in England is a great thing and we like to do it. What we must do more of is exercise!

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