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Writting Exercise: Why can't we work 4 days a week? I serched about this question and I in this text I am going to compare the two sides of the same coin. A lecture and a reading discuss the mandatory police requiring about companies offering the employees the option of working four-days workweek. The reading sets that the employees would feel more resterd and alert working for four days a week, insteed the lecture explain that this would force the companies to expend more for example in medicals benefits or in more space becouse the companies would need more employees. On the other hand the reading says about a reduction in the employments’ rate and how this workers would have to shifted to others. But the lecture refutes this, saying that no aditional work would be created. Finally the article states that employees who could afford a lower salar in exchaing would have more free time to improve the quality of their lives. At the same time the lecture ensures that the reasks would be a decreace in the capacity and profesionalism of the employers. The companies would spend more money hiring more supervision and the employees would never be efficent. :(

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Writing Exercise: Why can't we work 4 days a week?

I searched about this question and I in this text here I am going to compare the two sides of the same coin.

A lecture and a reading discuss the mandatory policy requiring about companies to offer offering the employees the option of working four-days each work week.
The reading sets says that the employees would feel more rested and alert working for four days a week. instead But the lecture explains that this would force the companies to expend more for example in medicals benefits or in more space because the companies would need more employees.
On the other hand the reading says talks about a reduction in the employments employees rate productivity and how this workers would have to be shifted to others. But the lecture refutes this, saying that no additional work would be created.
Finally the article states that employees who could afford a lower salary in exchange would have more free time to improve the quality of their lives. At the same time the lecture ensures claims that the risks would be a decrease in the capacity and professionalism of the employers. The companies would spend more money hiring more supervision and the employees would never be efficient.
:(

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Buen trabajo Maria! Solamente unos pocos correcciones gramaticales. Dime si tienes preguntas sobre mis correcciones. 


Si pudiere elegir, quisiere trabajar cuatros días cada semana...más tiempo a divertirme :)

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