Writing Exercise
Are you agree or disagree with this statement?
It's better to have lots of different friends than it is to have just a few friends.
I disagree with this stament.
When I lived in Barcelona I used to had a lot of friends. I was working in a shop, going to gym and taking dance classes. So I had a lot of activities, where I made a lot of friends. We used to had reunions and we went to partys. We have a lot of fun, that's for sure. One nigth I got out with my dance friends and I met Jose, we danced all the songs, and we instantly got in love. We started to got out with my dance friends and later I presented him to my gym friends and my work friends.
Evething was perfect until the shop where I was working got stoled, my boss was sure that I do it, and she fired me. I have no job and can't got any new becouse I haven't a license to work. I have to left my floor and my activities. I have no money so I didn't go out with my friends neither.One day Jose text me saying: I think you are a loser, I don't want to see you anymore. I was so sad, I crying all day and any of all my friends was calling me.
One day I was in my bed, crying or something like that and my phone rings. I really have a hope that was Carlos or any friend from Barcelona. But no, was Laura, my friend from high school, who doesn't has notice from me in a time and call me, she said thad I can go to her house and she will find me a job.
That day I understand that having just one friend, a really good and honest friend, its better that having one thousand friends.
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Writing Exercise
Are Do you agree or disagree with this statement?It's better to have lots of different friends than it is to have just a few friends.
I disagree with this stament.
When I lived in Barcelona I used to have a lot of friends. I was working in a shop, going to a gym and taking dance classes. So I had a lot of activities, where I made a lot of friends. We used to have reunions and we went to parties. We had a lot of fun, that's for sure. One night I went out with my dance friends and I met Jose. We danced to all the songs, and we instantly fell in love. We started to go out with my dance friends and later I presented introduced him to my gym friends and my work friends.
Everything was perfect until the shop where I was working got broken into stoled, my boss was sure that I had done it, and she fired me. I had no job and couldn't get a new one because I didn't have a license to work. I had to leave my flat and my activities. I had no money so I didn't go out with my friends either.One day Jose texted me saying: I think you are a loser, I don't want to see you anymore. I was so sad, I cried all day and none of all my many friends called me.
A bitter lesson.
One day I was in my bed, crying or something like that and my phone rang. I really had a hope that was Carlos or any friend from Barcelona. But no, it was Laura, my friend from high school, who hadn't received news from me in a time and called me, she said that I could go to her house and she would find me a job.
That day I understood that having just one friend, a really good and honest friend, is better that having one thousand friends.
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