A letter to my friend
Dear Sam!
How are you doing? Hope you’re well. I’m writing to let you know that everything is all right. Also I’d like to share with you my impressions of “New artist exhibition”, which I visited with my children last weekend.
As you know I’m not good at art, but it was really a great experience. Moreover I can say with all honesty it was the most exiting art event I’ve ever been in my life. It was worth seeing. I liked it very much.
A lot of wonderful works of art were shown in several sections. We were able to see modern pictures as well as sculptures made in ancient style. In addition, all exhibits were put up for sale. Therefore taking the opportunity I bought a beautiful Chinese vase made in techno style as a gift for my wife.
As far as I know given the great success of the event last weekend the management is going to organize the exhibition in a couple of weeks again. I recommend you to visit it. I’m guarantee you will get a lot of enjoy.
Your friend,
Valera
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EXCELLENT JOB!!
A letter to my friend
How are you doing? Hope you’re well. I’m writing to let you know that everything is all right. Also I’d like to share with you my impressions of “New artist exhibition”, which I visited with my children last weekend.
As you know I’m not good at art, but it was really a great experience. Moreover I can say with all honesty it was the most exiting art event I’ve ever been in my life. It was worth seeing. I liked it very much
A lot of wonderful works of art were shown in several sections. We were able to see modern pictures as well as sculptures made in ancient style. In addition, all works in the exhibits were put up for sale. Therefore taking advantage of the opportunity I bought a beautiful Chinese vase made in techno style as a gift for my wife.
As far as I know, given the great success of the event last weekend, I think the management is going to organize another exhibition in a couple of weeks again. I recommend you visit it. I guarantee you will get a lot of enjoyment from it.
Your friend,
Valera
Notes:
since it was 'the most exciting art event" you might want to say "I loved it" rather than "I liked it very much")
Insead of I guarantee you will get a lot of enjoyment from it, I would say I guarantee that you will enjoy it a lot
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