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essay about music Should everyone learn to play a musical instrument? Write about whether playing music is enjoyable and whether everyone can learn to play an instrument. It’s very important to play a musical instrument. Many researchers said that children who play music are more intelligent then the other. Moreover, there are many benefits that a child can take advantage: for example, music allows to improve self-discipline and organisational skills. In addition to this, an other research said that who plays an instrument is good in math also. Children that play or sing in a band or choir have much possibilities to socialise each other and with adults. One might decide to play or to sing: whatever he/she chooses, alone or in group, can have fun learning a new instrument or singing a particular song. Everyone can learn to play: I believe that all can have the talent inside, but however is necessary training and studying a lot to improve and develop musical skill. To sum up, to learn playing an instrument could do the difference in children’s education and would allow to have clever adults in future.

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essay about music

Should everyone learn to play a musical instrument? Write about whether playing music is enjoyable and whether everyone can learn to play an instrument.


It’s very important to play a musical instrument. Many researchers have said that children who play music are more intelligent than those who don't. Moreover, there are many benefits for a child can take advantage: for example, music allows to improves self-discipline and organisational skills.
In addition to this, an other research has said that people who play an instrument are also good in math 
Children that play or sing in a band or choir have a lot of  possibilities to socialise with other children   and with adults.  Whether a child decides to play an instrument or sing,  might decide to play or to sing: whatever he/she chooses,  whether the child decides to play alone or in a group,  the child can have fun learning a new instrument or singing a particular song. Everyone can learn to play: I believe that all can have the talent inside, but however training and studying a lot to improve and develop musical skill are necessary.
To sum up, to learn playing an instrument could make a difference in children’s education and would allow help them  be  clever adults in future.
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I don't play any instrument: indeed I'm not good in math!
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Interesting essay Jessica. What instument(s) do you play? I play instruments but I wish it would improve my maths skills [emoji]

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