My big dream
Hi everyone! I want to share with you my big dream. My dream is to travel to all the world no matter how much time it will take to me. I really love to know new cultures and to meet interesting people. I think it is fascinating to be and see the whole world. You don't have to chase after money and other material stuff. You just relax and become patient with all the people that you meet.
Unfortunately, of course, I can't allow that happen to me. I have too many commitments, so maybe one the in the future I would do this travel.
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Hi everyone! I want to share my big dream with you. My dream is to travel the world no matter how much time it takes. I really love learning about new cultures and meeting interesting people. I think it is fascinating to see the whole world. You don't have to chase after money and other material stuff. Just relax and be patient with all the people you meet.
Unfortunately, I am too busy now, but one day I hope I will travel the world.
I corrected some expressions so that it sounds more natural, and I simplified the last part, like the native speakers would say. Very well written. :)
Unfortunately, I am too busy now, but one day I hope I will travel the world.
I corrected some expressions so that it sounds more natural, and I simplified the last part, like the native speakers would say. Very well written. :)
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Nice man! I hope for you that you accomplish your dream.
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Hello man! I have the same dream. Since I was a little child I want to go visit and maybe live abroad, but until now I only have travelled through my own country, Brazil, which ok because it is also a beautiful country. However, even though travelling is always on my mind, I continue to postpone this because of the responsibilities I have with work and family. But this year I decided to finally make it real. I am going to go study English abroad for 6 weeks, maybe in Ireland or Malta. It's not cheap and it requires a lot of planning and some sacrifices, but I am sure it will worth the price. We have a responsibility to ourselves to find out what is meaningful to our lives and make this a priority. After this first travel, I won't stop. I want to go to Egypt, Dubai, and of course, Israel. Besides being a beautiful country, it is the cradle of krav-maga, one of my passions in life. See you around the world.
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