time trip
I went to my grand mother and grand father's grave two weeks ago. It was the anniversary of my grand mother's death. The day before I went to jeon-ju with my mother by bus for meeting relatives. They are my mother's siblings. we gathered together and had noodle for lunch. Then we leave for nam-won for trip. I haven't been to nam-won. This is famous for chun-hyang. We visited gwanghanru and took pictures a lot. This is a beautiful place. Then We got to lodge where is a korea traditional house. It is a very nice and warm house. There held a korea traditional concert like samulnori performance which is play the traditional instrument and sing. We stayed one day. After we went to sun-chang. The city is mom's hometown. I looked around the town on foot and visited the house where my mom lived in childhood.We also went to elementary school where my mom went to at that time. It was a time trip.
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time trip
I went to my grandmother and grandfather's grave two weeks ago. It was the anniversary of my grandmother's death. The day before, I went to Jeon-Ju with my mother by bus for to meet ing relatives. They are my mother's siblings. We gathered together and had noodles for lunch. Then we leave left for Nam-won. for trip. I haven't been to Nam-won. This place is famous for Chun-Hyang. We visited Gwanghanru and took pictures a lot a lot of pictures. This is a beautiful place. Then we got to lodge where is at a Korean traditional house. It is was a very nice and warm house. There held a A Korean traditional concert like called "samulnori" was held there. It is a performance in which is people play the traditional instruments and sing. We stayed there one day. After that, we went to Sun-chang. The city is my mom's hometown. I looked around the town on foot and visited the house where my mom lived in her childhood. We also went to the elementary school where my mom went to at that time. It was a time trip.--- typically these words are together "grandmother" and "grandfather" instead of "grand mother" and "grand father"
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--- since the passage was written about an event that happened in the past, the passage needs to remain in the past tense
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Thank you for your interest!!^^
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I don't know how much this is correct. But very interesting, thank you.
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