The Diary.

Saturday 24th March 2018

Last night I went to bed as a positive minded person after having a piece of encouragement from my language partner, Mr.Gordon Lang, who is giving his valuable time to correct me and motivate me for further writing. Even though I made heap of mistakes in my notebook entries, ultimately I will be where I want to be one day. Thankfully, I'm on the correct path.

Journal...
How lucky I am to born in a place which is filled with untouched natural beauty. Apart from the amiable sounds of birds and squirrels, no one else breaks the silence which can allow the hearing of the sound of a fallen needle.

I was in the middle of sleep and restlessness.(A contradiction because you cannot be asleep and restless sorry)I heard the warble of birds and gradually I was opening my eyes. Next to me my two little sons who have given me the holy name of "Mother", were in a deep sleep. Innocent faces make my life complete. Gleaming sunbeams were seeping through glass windows. It was the fresh start of " Saturday."

I woke up without making any noise which can disturb my bird's sleep. The coolness of the floor tingled my naked feet. As soon as I opened the main door, I got the lovely hug of cold wind. Sideways the tresses wind played, I stepped down to the greenish grass ground. Flowers were smiling as cute infants keeping morning dew drops on them. I slowly touched them with my fingers." My flower kids who give me a fresh start daily."

With a hot black coffee, I walked to the garden deck. What an elegant view!!...My mind is nudging me to recall my childhood memories. Incredibly I have changed a lot since the day I recognized my subconscious mind.

"Amma.....!! "

Oh!!.....This is the end of my assumption .A hectic day is going to start with my cute sons equal to my heart beat.

I am not entirely confident of my corrections, but I don't think they matter anyway. I think I understood most of what you meant and I agree that you are on the right track.

The Diary

Saturday 24th March 2018

Last night I went to bed as a positive minded person after having a piece of encouragement from my language partner,Mr.Gordon Lang who is giving his valuable time to correct me and motivate me for further writing.Eventhough I made heap of mistakes in my notebook enteries, ultimatly I will be where I wanted to be oneday one day. Thankfully, I'm in to on the correct path.

Journal...
How lucky I am to be born in a place where filled with untouched nature beauty.Apart than from the amiable sounds of birds and squirrels, no one else break breaks the silence in which you can hear even the sound of a fallen needle.
 
I was in the middle of sleep and restlessness.I heard the warble of birds and gradually I was opening my eyes.Next to me my two little sons who have given me the holy name of "Mother", were in a deep sleep.Innocent faces made my life completed.Gleaming sunbeams were seeping through glass windows .It was the fresh start of " Saturday"

I woke up without making any noice which can disturb my birds's sleep.The coolness of the floor tingled my naked feet.As soon as I opened the main door , I got the a lovely hug of cold wind.Side waying the tresses the wind played, I stepped down onto the greenish grass ground.Flowers were smiling as cute infants keeping morning dew drops on them.I slowly touched them with my fingers." My flower kids who are giving me a fresh start daily."

With a hot black coffee, I walked to the garden deck.What an elegant view!!...My mind is nudging me to recall my childhood memories.Incredibly I have changed a lot since the day I recognized my subconcious mind.

"Amma.....!! "

Oh!!.....This is the end of my assumption .A hectic day is going to start with my cute sons equal to my heart beat.

Corrections are highly welcomed :)