my Favorite Way of keeping Fit
Keeping Fit is very important in our life. I adopt two methods to achieve this goal.
First, proper exercise can help me to maintain energy and keep from illness. Everday after work, I walk a long way to my home, almost seven kilometers. because I am very busy so I don't have enough time to do exercise. Brisk walking with music is a good method.
Second, make a diet plan can help me to keep from absorbing too much fat, sugar and carbohydrae. Although chocolates, potato crisps and roast chickens are very delicious, excessuve consumption of these products will increase risk of illness. I eat merely some nut on supper because I did't do more exercise at night, so there is nothing energy to consume.
This is my favorite way of keeping fit. it is not difficult, but suit me.
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My Favorite Way of Keeping Fit
Keeping fit is very important in our life. I adopt two methods to achieve this goal.First, proper exercise can help me to maintain my energy and keep me from illness. Everyday after work, I walk a long way to my home, almost seven kilometers. Because I am very busy so I don't have enough time to do exercise. Brisk walking with music is a good method.
Second, making a diet plan can help me to keep from absorbing too much fats, sugars and carbohydrates. Although chocolates, potato crisps and roast chickens are very delicious, excessive consumption of these products will increase risk of illness. I only eat merely some nuts on during supper because I didn't do more exercise at night, so there is nothing energy to consume.
This is my favorite way of keeping fit. iIt is not difficult, but suits me.
"didn't" is spelled with an "n" because it is a contraction of "did not" and pronounced something like "dident". "It" is singular, so "suit" should have a "s" at the end. In English redundant conjuntions are often ungrammatical. For example, sentence structures like "because... so...", "although... but..." are not allowed and in each case one of the words have to be removed.
"Keeping fit" is not a proper noun (it's not a name or technical term) so it can't be capitalised in normal (non-titular) text.
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