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When it comes to the definition of ritual, people always think of an occasion of festival or ceremony. Rituals may be prescribed by traditions or regulations, and this trait is even more obvious in a religious community. However, rituals are a feature of our human society. It includes not only the worship rites but also includes the seemingly ordinary things in our own life.
Rich or poor, young or old, we all need more or less sense of rituals otherwise our existence will lose meaning. My mother is a person who has added a lot of rituals in my life. When I was a child, I thought my mother was the busiest woman in the world because she always left home very early and worked very late. I can still remember the hurry sight of my mother when I was woken up. Busy as my mother was, she always cooked breakfast for me. She convinced that breakfast was the most important meal in a day and it was indispensable. Although sometimes it was just some noodles with a poached egg, it supplied energy to my study and activity during the whole morning. As time goes by, I am a high school student now. The study is so hard and busy that I have to live at school to save time to study. But no matter busy I am I would spare time for breakfast. It is when I experience the busy life that I understand my mother’s minds.
As far as I am concerned, breakfast is the ritual to start a new day. It not only provides us with the energy to live but also gives us the time to think of the significance of living. “Sense of rituals is to make one day different from other days, make one point is different from other times.” as the book Little Prince goes. And the various breakfast exactly makes our life meaningful and full of sense of rituals.
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Could you please help me with my composition?
When it comes to the definition of ritual, people always think of an occasion such as a festival or ceremony. Rituals may be prescribed by traditions or regulations, and this trait is even more obvious in a religious community. However, rituals are a feature of our human society. It includes not only the worship rites but also includes the seemingly ordinary things in our own life.Rich or poor, young or old, we all need more or less sense of rituals to a greater or lesser degree, otherwise our existence will lose meaning. My mother is a person who has added included a lot of rituals into my life. When I was a child, I thought my mother was the busiest woman in the world because she always left home very early and worked very late. I can still remember the hurry (blurry?)sight of my mother when I was woken up. Busy as my mother was, she always cooked breakfast for me. She convinced me that breakfast was the most important meal in a day and that it was indispensable. Although sometimes it was just some noodles with a poached egg, it supplied energy to my studies and activities during the whole morning. As time goes by, I am have become a high school student now. The study Studying is so hard and busy that I have to live at school to save time to study. But no matter how busy I am I would spare time for breakfast. It is when I experience the busy life that I understand my mother’s minds.(teachings)
As far as I am concerned, breakfast is the ritual to start a new day. It not only provides us with the energy to live but also gives us the time to think of the significance of living. “Sense of rituals is to make one day different from other days, make one point is different from other times.” as the book "Little Prince" goes. And the various breakfasts exactly makes our life meaningful and full of the sense of rituals.
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