Flightless umbrella. (Russia story)
Hare went to forest and found umbrella. Suddenly saw - direct from bush see on him wolf furious-disgusting eyes.
-Trap,-shook hare,-run of late. In vain I on stamp under umbrella,perhaps, wolf me for mushroom will take.
And did so. It costs on a stump, eyes screwed up, teeth knocks because of fear, but himself does not move.
And wolf little by little to back went...
And here, on hare happiness, a strong wind blew! He picked up the umbrella with the hare and raised it high in the sky.
Flies hare above forest, laughs, but wolf at the bottom on earth runs, teeth knocks.
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Flightless umbrella. (Russia story)
The hare went to the forest and found an umbrella. Suddenly he saw - direct from a bush looking at him, a wolf's furious-disgusting eyes.-A trap! shook the hare - too late to run. In vain I will stand under the umbrella, and perhaps the wolf will take me for a mushroom?
And so it did. Hare sits on a stump, eyes screwed up, teeth chattering from fear, but never moving.
And the wolf, little by little, comes back...
And there, luck of luck, a strong wind blows! He picks up the umbrella with the hare and raises them high in the sky.
Hare flies above forest, laughs, but wolf at bottom on earth runs, teeth knocking.*
*I have omitted the articles in this paragraph, Russian style, just to see how it would be. Better? Worse?
Very well written!
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Please pay attention to your use of articles. :the hare, the forest, an umbrella.......
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