I went to Chengdu for a week I went to Chengdu last week.With my leader and other two people . That was suppossed to be a buessness trip. But because of the beautfull view in Chengdu ,we had a good t

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I went to Chengdu for a week I went to Chengdu last week.With my leader and other two people . That was suppossed to be a buessness trip. But because of the beautfull view in Chengdu ,we had a good time there. We went to the Kuan Alley and Zhai Alley. We saw so many excellent artworks,I could not move my eyes from them. Than now I am off my work,I will write later. I am back~~~ When we were standing in line waiting for the uphill ropeway to Emei Mountain--a holy land of Buddhism. Two foreigners asked me:If the cost of the cableway was catained in their admission tickets? I explained that the Chinese word(不含）writen on the tickets means not catained. They were very disappointed because if they went outside to buy new tickets they need to get back in line,that would waste too much time.So I asked the guide if they can help them to buy the tickets. Fortunately,the guide was a very kind girl,she helped them buy the tickets. please help me to correct this article.

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I went to Chengdu for a week

I went to Chengdu last week with my leader and other two two other people.
That It was suppossed supposed to be a buessness business trip,
but because of the beautfull beautiful view in Chengdu we had a good time there.
We went to the Kuan Alley and Zhai Alley.
We saw so many excellent artworks; I could not move take my eyes from off them.

You could also say "We saw so many excellent works of art that stole my gaze."

Than Now I am off my work, I will write later.
I am back~~~
When we were standing in line waiting for the uphill ropeway to Emei Mountain--a holy land of Buddhism.
Two foreigners asked me: If the cost of the cable way was catained contained in their admission tickets? I explained that the Chinese word(不含）writen written on the tickets means the cost of the cable way is not catained contained.
They were very disappointed because if they went outside to buy new tickets they need to get back in line, and that would waste too much time. So, I asked the guide if they she can could help them to buy the tickets.
Fortunately, the guide was a very kind girl, and she helped them buy the tickets.

please help me to correct this article.

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