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Ryan Tsai
English writing!!! Please help me!! City is a place where people form a population and live in. Each city's feature varies, whether it's big or small it has their own characteristic which the citizens are proud of. I live in a crowded city, ehich has the biggest population in our country and also leads the most dense population in the world. Due to the crowded situation, we have three MRT stations to distribute to vast population during rush hour, otherwise, people might go to the same station and paralyze the traffic.

When it comse to the famous food, it must be yungho soy milk, which has been known for over decades. The rice-like color liquid with crunchy and oily snack have been the perfect match and represent breakfast for this city life ,which has supported the citizens since our ancestors first moved here.

There's no pros and crons for a city. As long as the citizens live hard and put an effort in their life, all the cities shall be awesome. We all should be proud of the place we're living in, because that's how out culture has been inherited and passed on to our generation and continued till now.

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A City is a place where people form from a population and live in. Each city's features varies vary, whether it's big or small it has their own characteristic which the citizens are proud of. I live in a crowded city, which has the biggest population in our country and also leads has the most dense population in the world. Due to the crowded situation, we have three MRT stations to distribute to vast population during rush hour, otherwise, people might go to the same station and paralyze the traffic.

When it comes to the famous food, it must be yungho soy milk, which has been known for over decades. The rice-like color liquid with crunchy and oily snack have been the perfect match and represent breakfast for this city life ,which has supported the citizens since our ancestors first moved here.

There's no pros and cons for a city. As long as the citizens live hard (I suggest saying "live life to the fullest") and put an effort in their life lives, all the cities shall be awesome. We all should be proud of the place we're living in, because that's how our culture has been inherited and passed on to our next generation and continued till now.(till now implies that it ends now, which I don't think you mean)

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