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My weekend in Paris Hi. I traveled to France a 1 week ago, it was the first time that I go out of my country, I arrrived to Paris at night, so tired, because I spend 11 hours in the flight from Mexico City to Paris. I am in France taking a training, in a city near to Paris, called Cergy. After a hard week in the work, I had free time to know Paris and their wonderful places. On Saturday I went to the Louvre museum, then I walk to the Notre-Dame catredal, here I had the opportunity of go over the towers and see all the city, while I was walking to Notre-Dame it was raining and then, when I was over the towers start to snowing. That was very new and rare for me, because in Mexico the weather is warm, I never got see snow before. My plan was to visit six places that day, unfortunately I just can visit 2, I hope can visit the others the next weekend. Regards and thank you in advance for the corrections, I’m trying improve my English everyday.

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My weekend in Paris

Hi.

I traveled to France a 1 week ago, it was the first time that I traveled outside go out of my country, I arrived in Paris at night, so tired, because I spent 11 hours on in the flight from Mexico City to Paris.

I am in France taking a training class , in a city near to Paris, called Cergy.


After a hard week in the work, I had free time to see know Paris and their wonderful places. On Saturday I went to the Louvre museum, then I walked to the Notre-Dame cathedral, here I had the opportunity of go over to  the towers and see all the city.  While I was walking to Notre-Dame it was raining and then, when I was over the towers, it started  to snowing. That was very new and rare for me, because in Mexico the weather is warm, I never got see snow before. (que bueno!!!!)

My plan was to visit six places that day, unfortunately I could only visit two just can visit 2, I hope I can visit the others the next weekend.

Regards and thank you in advance for the corrections, I’m trying improve my English everyday.


Muy bien!  Siga trabajondo .


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