我的爱情。

Notes：

1. Time phrase should be placed in the beginning of a sentence, or after the subject.

2. “里”should be added after a place (which is 大学 in this sentence) to express a place.

3. "Beautiful" or "Pretty" are always used for a girl, for boy we use “帅”,(handsome, shuài).

4. "花园" is always used to describe "garden", if you want to express "park", we use "公园"

5. “We like to talk.” should be "我们喜欢聊天（儿）。"

6. “I think” should be ”我觉得/我认为”

7. “互相”is an adverb, we put it before the verb or predicate(which is 合适 in the sentence).

我的爱情。

五年前，我在大学里认识了我的男朋友。我们是一见钟情。他叫Lesha，他很高也很帅。我们喜欢一起去电影院、公园和别的地方。我们喜欢聊天儿。我觉得我们的感情很深。我们的朋友笑着说：你们互相很合适。