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My second a note My day is today started in 7:20 Outside the window a sun shining but else very cold. The snow everywhere. I want heat and rial spring. It is now i continue my education in school graphic design and learn English.

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My second a note.

My day is today started at 7:20 this morning.
I can see the sun outside the window but it is very cold. There is snow everywhere.
I want the heat and real Spring.
I will now continue my education at graphic design school and learn English.
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My day started at 7:20
Outside the window the sun is shining but still the weather is very cold. The snow is everywhere.
I want some heat and real spring.
Now i am studying graphic design in school , and learn English.
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My day started at 7:20
Outside the window the sun is shining but still the weather is very cold. The snow is everywhere.
I want some heat and real spring.
Now i am studying graphic design in school , and learn English.
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My second a note

My day started at 7:20am
Outside the window, the sun was shining but it is very cold. The snow is everywhere.
I want to feel warm, l can not wait for spring.
Today I will continue my education in school graphic design and learn English.
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My second note

My day, today, started at 7:20.
Outside the window the Sun* is shining but otherwise it is very cold. The snow is everywhere.
I want heat and a real Spring*.
It is now that I continue my education in school graphic design and learn English.

*or, sun, spring.

Very well written!

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