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Claim Dear Sir I’m writing with regard to my apartment in the house which you build. I bought the apartment three months ago. And I have many problems with it. Firstly, home renovation is bad. The wind blows through windows and so I need to spend more money to heating. The dry wall is too thin and I'm afraid that my child will break it. I should also like to point out that paint in entrance hall comes off. It's ridiculously! Your adviser told me that this house would be in green garden. You built the house five years ago and you didn't plant any trees up to now. I know that area of house should be secure. I see strange people from my window every evening. You must employ the gatekeepers. I would be grateful if you would understand my comments and correct and repair different defects. I very much hope that you do it. If you won't do anything, I will file a lawsuit against your company. Yours faithfully, cliff dweller

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Dear Sir,
I’m writing in regards to my apartment in the house which you have build. I bought the apartment three months ago, and I have many problems with it.
First, the home renovations are bad. The wind blows through the windows, so I need to spend more money on heating. The dry wall is too thin and I'm afraid that my child will break it. I would also like to point out that the paint in the entrance hall comes off. It's ridiculous! Your adviser told me that this house would have a green garden. You built the house five years ago and you didn't plant any trees up until now.
I know that the area of house should be secure. I see strange people through my window every evening. You need to employ gatekeepers.
I would be grateful if you would understand my comments and correct and repair the house's defects. I very much hope that you do . If you won't do anything, I will file a lawsuit against your company.
Yours faithfully, cliff dweller

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