introduce myself
I am a graduated sudent of Tsinghua University. I am in academy of fine arts. my English level is poor, so It is difficult for me to talk a loud. During my study , I find English is very important. so I would like to find a language partner. Definetly, We can help each other.
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“I am a graduated sudent of Tsinghua University.“ .. This sentence means you have already graduated from Tsinghua. I think you want to say "I am a graduate student at Tsinghua University""I am in academy of fine arts." perfect
"my English level is poor, so It is difficult for me to talk a loud." Here it is better to say: "it is difficult for me to speak", but "it is difficult for me to talk", or "it is difficult for me to talk out loud" are also okay.
"During my study , I find English is very important." This might sound better if you say "During my study, I have found English to be very important".
"so I would like to find a language partner." Always start a sentence with a capital letter.
"Definetly, We can help each other." This might sound a little more natural if you say "We can definitely help each other".
I hope this helps. -Eric
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introduce myself
I 'm a graduated student of Tsinghua University. I 'm in academy of fine arts. my English level is poor, so It is difficult for me to talk a lot ...During my study , I discover that English is very important. so I would like to find a language partner. Definetly, We can help each other.Want to progress faster?
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