My first task. Can you help me with my mistakes?

Hello it's my first note. My name is Nick, I'am from Russia. And I try learn Englis. My favorite goal it's pass IELTS. It's my first task. My teacher asked me writting some article about food witch I eat. In the morning I would like to eat hercules porridge or musli with milk or yougurt, then i drink coffee witch milk and with out shugar. On the lunch i prefer to eat some soup and pasta with meat or fish. On the evening when dinner i would like vegebetals and I drink a cup of tea with honney

Hello. This is my first note.  My name is Nick, I'm from Russia. I am trying to learn English.  I want to pass the IELTS exam. My teacher asked me to write some articles about the food I eat.  In the morning I like to eat Hercules porridge or meusli with milk or yoghurt. Then I drink coffee with milk and no sugar.  For lunch I prefer to have soup and pasta with meat or fish. In the evening I have vegetables and a cup of tea with honey for dinner.

My first task. Can you help me with the mistakes?

Hello, it's my first note. My name is Nick, I'm From Russia, and I'm trying to learn English. My (favorite) goal it's is to pass IELTS. It's my first task. My teacher asked me writting to write some articles about the food witch that I eat. In the morning, I would like to eat Hercules porridge or muesli with milk or yougurt, then I will drink coffee witch milk and without shugar. On the For lunch, I would prefer to eat some soup and pasta with meat or fish. On In the evening, when it's dinner time, I would like vegebetals vegetables, and I will drink a cup of tea with honney.

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Additional notes

'This is my...' is more common than 'it's my....' in writing.
Be careful with tenses, and infinitives.

Good luck with your study.

Edited to change the last 'I'll' to 'I will' for consistency.

My first entry. Can you help me with the mistakes?

Hello, this is my first entry. My name is Nick, I'm from Russia, and I'm trying to learn English. My goal is to pass IELTS. This is my first task. My teacher asked me to write some articles about the food I eat. In the morning I like to eat Hercules porridge or muesli with milk or yogurt, then I drink coffee with milk and no sugar.  For lunch I prefer to eat soup and pasta with meat or fish. For dinner, I like to eat vegetables and drink a cup of tea with honey.