Dom's entry 三百三十三。R
Dom's entry 三百三十四。R （not 三百三十三）
我没有妹妹 但是我觉得有妹妹一定很好 ，因为我哥哥有个妹妹
你回英国了吗？
上周我日回到英国。
你上次吃火锅是什么时候？
我一个星期前吃了火锅。
这本书是关于什么的？
这是关于醉酒的学生。
Have a nice Sunday!
(R in the title is an indication for me that this is corrected version of the sentence I tried to use in one of the previous notebooks entries)
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Dom's entry 三百三十四。R （not 三百三十三）
我没有妹妹 但是我觉得有妹妹一定很好，因为我哥哥(? ) 有个妹妹. Grammatically, this sentence is correct. However， “哥哥” & “妹妹” in Chinese actually mean your biological siblings. Therefore, if you do not have a sister, it is unlikely that your biological brother has one. The same rule applies to stepbrothers and stepsisters. It could be “ 表哥” if you mean one of your older male cousins on your mother's side of the family, or “堂哥” if it is one on your father's side of the family.
你回英国了吗？
上周日, 我回到英国。We actually prefer to say ”是的, 我上周日刚回到英国."
你上次吃火锅是什么时候？
我一个星期前刚吃过火锅。
这本书是关于什么的？
这是关于（？一个 or 一群）醉酒的学生的故事。
Have a nice Sunday!
(R in the title is an indication for me that this is corrected version of the sentence I tried to use in one of the previous notebooks entries)
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我没有妹妹，但是我觉得有妹妹一定很好（很幸福） ，因为我哥哥有个妹妹。（ this sentence is kinda confused because if you dont have a sister, why would your older brother have? Or he is your cousin？if so, it would be better to say 我表哥）
你回英国了吗？ 上周日我我日回到英国。
你上次吃火锅是什么时候？ 我一个星期前吃了火锅。
这本书是关于什么的？ 这是（一本）关于醉酒的学生的书。
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Dom's entry 三百三十三。R
Dom's entry 三百三十四。R （not 三百三十三）我没有妹妹,但是我觉得有妹妹一定很好 ，因为我哥哥有个妹妹
你回英国了吗？
上周日我回到英国。
你上次吃火锅是什么时候？
我一个星期前吃了火锅。
这本书是关于什么的？
这是关于醉酒的学生。
Have a nice Sunday!
(R in the title is an indication for me that this is corrected version of the sentence I tried to use in one of the previous notebooks entries)
not bad
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