Need corrections from friends using English Q) If you succeeded in a mission from your boss, To whom you would reward, your boss or colleagues? A) I think I would succeed in the project thanks

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Wooram Boo

Need corrections from friends using English Q) If you succeeded in a mission from your boss, To whom you would reward, your boss or colleagues? A) I think I would succeed in the project thanks to both of them. Because I’m working with many people in a large company Hyundai and I’m confident that It’s not possible to succeed whatever I do by myself. so, If I succeeded in the project, Many co-workers including team leader would assist in the mission. Therefore, I’d like to treat all of them to dinner to show my appreciation and spend some our quality time.

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Hi Wooram,

Is this a question for a job? I have made some corrections for you. Are you really going to treat your whole organisation for dinner? I don't think that's possible. But if so, I have bolded the last of the sentence ☺️

Q) If you succeeded in a mission from your boss, ;To to whom you would you reward, your boss or colleagues?

A) I think I would succeed in the project thanks to both of them. I think my success should be shared by both my boss and my colleagues. Because I’m working with many people in a large company Hyundai and I’m confident that It’s not possible to succeed whatever I do by myself. Working in a large organisation like Hyundai alone cannot be done without my boss to lead and my colleagues to collaborate effectively. If I succeeded in the project, Many co-workers including team leader would assist in the mission. Without them I would not succeed any of the tasks that are given to me. Therefore, I’d like to treat all of them to dinner to show my appreciation and spend some our quality time. To appreciate them is an understatement.

and I am willing to treat them all to dinner.

Need corrections from friends using English

Q) If you succeeded in a mission from your boss, To whom you would reward, your boss or colleagues?

A) I think I would have become successful in the project thanks to both my boss and colleagues.

Since I’m working with many people in a large company, Hyundai, I’m confident that It’s not possible to succeed whatever I do by myself.

Therefore, If I succeeded in the project, many co-workers including the team leader would have assisted in the mission.

Therefore, I’d treat them all to dinner to show my appreciation and spend some quality time together.

Q) If you succeeded in a mission from your boss, To whom you would reward, your boss or colleagues? A) I believe I would succeed in the project thanks to both my boss and colleagues. Since I work in a large company I am confident that it's possible to succeed in whatever I do by myself. If I was to succeed in the project, many co-workers including the team leader would assist in this mission. Once the task is finished I’d like to treat all of them to dinner to show my appreciation and to spend some quality time together.

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