JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON Mar.18th
I would like someone to correct my diary entry( or to tell me the natural way of saying some things below. But I would be glad even if you JUST CORRECT my entry) I was wondering if you could do that for me, please?
JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON Mar.18th
Of course today, I will have work so I have going to go work soon, like in about 2 hours. That's how I have some time to write down a notebook here. This time, I will write about my job here as possible as I tell. Actually, it is so hard to tell well you guys about my job, and telling you what cause me the difficulty, it's like "how does my job like?" or "What am I do for my lives". These question is really difficult for me. If someone question me to like these question, I might be not willing to answer them as the reason told you before. If I would have to tell someone about my job, I would answer like this "it's like management of a shopping center" "it's like retail". Honestly, Until joining the company I work now, I don't really want to join this very much because I had felt that it doesn't suit me. But I thought that it is not really good that just because I just felt the job might not suit me. Yeah, at the end of the day, I became loving the job actually. I hope to do work the best from now on, too. I have the some reason why I like my job. First of all, on this job, I can learn how to move other workers to run the shopping center, and it's so fun for me. Just because my job is like retail, I doesn't have to do sell something to consumer. It's enough to manage other coworkers. That's how, there are lots of the skills I have to get. Of course, here is problem, in the society at this time, there is the lack of manpower. So if we would have not manpower enough to run it, we have to sell by myself.
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JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON Mar.18th
I would like someone to correct my diary entry( or to tell me the natural way of saying some things below. But I would be glad even if you JUST CORRECT my entry) I was wondering if you could do that for me, please?JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON Mar.18th
Of course today, I will work in about 2 hours. That's why I have some time to write in my notebook here. This time, I will write about my job here as much as possible. Actually, it is so hard to tell you guys about my job, it's like "What is my job like?" or "What do I do for a living?" These questions are really difficult for me. If someone asks me to like these questions, I might not be willing to answer them because of the reason told you before. If I would have to tell someone about my job, I would answer like this "it's like management of a shopping center" "it's like retail". Honestly, before I didn't really want to join the company because I had felt that it didn't suit me. However, at the end of the day, I came to love the job actually. I hope to work the best I can from now on, too. I have some reasons why I like my job. First of all, on this job, I can learn how to move other workers to run the shopping center, and it's so fun for me. Just because my job is in retail, it doesn't mean I have to sell something to the consumer. It's enough to manage other coworkers. That's how there are lots of the skills I have to get. Of course, here is problem, in the society at this time, there is the lack of manpower. So if we would have not manpower enough to run it, we have to sell by myself.
Thanks for sharing about your job. I was confused on the part about manpower. Were you talking about not having enough workers available?
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JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON Mar.18th(writing about my job) course today, I will work in about 2 hours. That's why I have some time to write in my notebook here. This time, I will write about my job here as much as possible. Actually, it is so hard to tell you guys about my job, it's like "what's my job like?" or "what do I do for a living?". These questions are really difficult for me. If someone asks me to like these questions, I might not be willing to answer them because of the reason told you before. If I would have to tell someone about my job, I would answer like this "it's like management of a shopping center" "it's like retail". Honestly, before I didn't really want to join the company because I had felt that it didn'T suit me. However, at the end of the day, I came to love the job actually. I hope to work the best I can from now on too. I have some reasons why I like my job. First of all, on this job, I can learn how to move other workers to run the shopping center. It's so fun for me. Just because my job is in retail, it doesn't mean I have to sell something to the consumer. It's enough to manage other coworkers. That's how there are lots of the skills I have to get. Of course, here is problem, in the society at this time, there is the lack of manpower. So if we would have not manpower enough to run it, we have to sell by myself.
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