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A funny but dangerous experience In my childhood, I was continuously pushing to play whatever sport possible every time but this led me to face a very unusual event. In particular, my family and I were visiting my grandparents in a little town not so far from Turin and we decided to spend one day on a lovely hill quite close to where they live. I easily got bored since I wasn't playing with anyone and that's why I pushed my grandfather to play bowls with me since he loved that sport. We luckily found a bowls ground where we were spending the day and therefore we started playing but it wasn't so much after we started that I got bored again since he was too good for me. I suddenly looked up above me and I saw a wire with some flags around it because that was the day of a local festivity and everything was decorated in that way. I don't know exactly the reason, probably because I loved football, I decided to hurl the bowl I had in my hand up around the wire and that's actually what I did but the main problem was that I didn't move from where I was standing so that the bowl fell in front of my head. After few seconds, a huge bruise was present in my head just above my eyes and both my parents and grandparents were quite shocked and worried. Fortunately, after 4 days and a lot of ice the bruise disappeared from my head, making this event a funny one. Since then I have learned to not kick any bowl with my head again.

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A funny but dangerous experience

In my childhood, I was always pushing to play whatever sport possible, all the time but because of this I faced a very unusual event.
More specifically,, my family and I were visiting my grandparents in a little town not so far from Turin and we decided to spend one day on a lovely hill quite close to where they live.
I got bored easily  since I wasn't playing with anyone and that's why I pushed my grandfather to play bowls with me since he loved that sport.
We luckily found a bowls ground where we spent the day and so we started playing, but it wasn't too long after we started that I got bored again since he was too good for me.
I suddenly looked up above me and I saw a wire with some flags around it because that was the day of a local festivity and everything was decorated in that way.
I don't know exactly the reason, probably because I loved football, but I decided to hurl the bowl I had in my hand up around the wire and that's actually what I did. But the main problem was that I didn't move from where I was standing so then the bowl fell in front of my head.
After few seconds, a huge bruise was present on my head just above my eyes and both my parents and grandparents were quite shocked and worried.
Fortunately, after 4 days and a lot of ice, the bruise disappeared from my head, making this event a funny one.
Since then I have learned to not hit any bowl with my head again.

Notes:
Very good! You're clearly an advanced student. I would say the main area you need to work on is learning when to use formal versus familiar vocabulary. For example, one does not regularly say 'therefore' when telling stories such as this, as the word is only really used on the news, in academic papers, etc. Other than that I would also learn which verbs go with which prepositions and be careful with synonyms. (One only kicks with one's feet, not with one's head!)

If you or anyone else needs help in English, feel free to book a trial lesson with me. :)

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