My mother is without any doubt is my everything in my life and the completest individual that I will ever know. She gave birth to me without thinking about all of the injuries that may be suffered. Moreover, she is very beautiful and has i the same kinda eyes that i have. I am really happy when the people say that I have many similarities with my mother. But when I was young, I was always against my mother's orders and never listened to her advice. Sometimes i saw her crying because of me. I knew that I was the selfish one. I must had to get everything that I wanted without thinking about my mother's effort. Instead On the contrary, she always do put in all of her effort to fulfill my needs. Years have passed, and was I entered to a high school that far away from my home. There I realize realised, I'm the lucky one who has with a grateful mother like her, compared to the others my friend's mother. As I saw they never giving a gave care and love to their children and always speam speak loudly and crushly* to their children. I am really thankful to god that gives for giving me a wonderful mother. She is/was always by my side and listened to all of my problems and helped me to solve a problem, and she always treated me gently. Furtheremore, she never complained about her pain and bore it alone. I am really sorry mother. Therefore, I intend to achieve the first place in my high school. Finally, I got it and my mother looked so proud of me, at least I can put a smile on her face with my achievements**. Thank you mother, for all of your love and care that you gave me I have grown into an active and caring woman, I promise I will never disappoint you in the future, Love you my mother

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