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Homework Everyone’s opinions are different about having the homework after school. There are many arguments on the both sides of homework. I still believe that homework is a necessary process of education for children. There are many reasons why people disagree that homework is an unnecessary item for children. Firstly, here is a evidence to support this idea that homework didn’t useful to improve the outcomes of education. For example, the country such as Finland, where the schools don’t give their students homework, similarly top international education organizations agree with this idea too.Secondly, many parents agree that the time in school is already long enough for their children, and this may cause the tiring to do homework when they go home. Finally, this is obvious that fun time is helpful for their brain development. From the above arguments, I support the idea that homework plays an important role in the children of education. The main benefit from the homework is to encourage their independent learning and enhancing memories. Students faced the challenges by themselves at their own pace. For example, students may apply the knowledge they have learnt in the classroom and answer the exercises at home, student may recall the memories from the classroom to decide the answer for the questions on the homework. In my own opinion, it is important for children to develop an independent study attitude and this is a great preparation for them to work alone. To sum up, homework definitely has its weakness, but I believe that the benefits will be reminded in the future.

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Everyone’s opinion is different when it comes to homework. There are arguments on both sides of the for/against homework debate.

There are several reasons why homework is worthless. First, there is a evidence to support the idea that homework has not improved learning, eg. in Finland where homework is unknown. Similarly top international education organizations agree with this idea, too. Secondly, many parents agree that the time they spend in school is already long enough for their children, and that they may be too tired for it when they come home. Finally, it is obvious that fun time helps develop their brain. 

Homework's main benefit is to encourage independent learning and enhance memories. Students face challenges by themselves at their own pace. For example, students can apply the knowledge learnt in the classroom to the exercises at home. They might recall the classroom lesson to decide the answer to their homework questions at home. It is important for children to develop an independent study attitude and this greatly prepares them to work alone.

From the paragraph above, I support the idea that homework plays an important role in a child's education, and I believe that children still need to do homework.

To sum up, homework definitely has its weaknesses, but I believe that its benefits will be recalled in the future.

Very well written!

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