She (Please help me correct my composition)

When I was a little boy, all I had to do in life was eat and sleep. It was my mother who worked hard to raise my three brothers, sisters, and me. I always thank her very much, but I often rebel, which is not good. I hope my family will be healthy.

Thank you

Your English is pretty good Tino, keep it up!

A correction from an English learner :

When I was a little boy, all I could do were just eating, playing and sleeping, but of course I would always think of my mother. That was because she had been working very hard to raise me and my three siblings. Although I was sometimes rebellious, I would always be grateful to her. I wish my mother and the whole family will always be healthy. Thank you.