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Check my sentences please [When I was in the Philipenes ]

I was in the Philipenes about 2 years ago for studying English. I stayed there for 2 month.

I thought I would die before I went there because I heard there was dangerous but I chose there because of the price, also I have never been there so I wanted to try to go there.

When I arrived in the Philippines and went to the ESL school, it was completely new views the I've never seen before.

I was kind of shocked about what their situation. I felt also humid than I expected.

My first room mates were Korean and I was happy because I love Korea.

However I faced on difference in culture between Korea and Japan. For example, our school's rule was if we used an air condition over their degree, we have to pay extra for it, so I really cared about how should I save the electricity as much as I could but my roommates, Korean, they really didn't care about it even though they might have to pay more, so I told them what I wanted to do but finally they couldn't understand me.

I changed my room mate with Japanese room mate, she was also tried to save the electricity for us.

I thought it was only me that care about that but I heard most of Korean in our school, they didn't care about pay for extra electricity fee.

I thought it was really interesting because most of Japanese tried to save it.

I think there is no correction, pay for comfortable or not. I think Japanese think "extra fee" is really waste of money but Korean think that priority is feeling so they don't think that is "waste".

I felt it was very good opportunity that I could know about Korean culture more.

Besides, I hang out with Korean friends many times and tried to go to many places in the Philippines, then I realized that there was actually not so dangerous than I expected, rather I really like there and now, I really want to go back there again.

Many people are kind and funny!

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Check my sentences please

[When I was in the Phillipines ]

I was in the Phillipines about 2 years ago for studying English. I stayed there for 2 months.

Before I went there,  I thought I would die  because I heard it was dangerous but I chose there because of the price, also I have never been there so I wanted to try to go there.

we don't usually use "there" as the subject of a verb, e.g. "there was dangerous" sounds strange. "there" can usually be used as the object of a verb e.g. "I chose there".

When I arrived in the Philippines and went to the ESL school, it was completely new views that I've never seen before.

I was kind of shocked about what their situation. I felt also humid than I expected. 

My first room mates were Korean and I was happy because I love Korea.

However I faced a difference in culture between Korea and Japan. For example, our school's rule was if we used an air conditioner above their temperature, we have to pay extra for it, so I really cared about how I should save the electricity as much as I could but my roommates, Korean, they really didn't care about it even though they might have to pay more, so I told them what I wanted to do but finally they couldn't understand me.

I changed my room mate with a Japanese room mate, she was also tried to save the electricity for us.

I thought it was only me that cared about that but I heard most of the Koreans in our school, they didn't care about paying for extra electricity fee.

"about paying" - a verb is always in the "-ing" form after a preposition

I thought it was really interesting because most of Japanese tried to save it.

I think there is no correction, pay for comfortable or not. I think Japanese think "extra fee" is really waste of money but Koreans think that feeling good is a priority so they don't think that is "waste".

I felt it was very good opportunity that I could know about Korean culture more.

Besides, I hung out with Korean friends many times and tried to go to many places in the Philippines, then I realized that it was actually not so dangerous as I expected, rather I really like there and now, I really want to go back there again.

Many people are kind and funny!

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Check my sentences please

[When I was in the Philippines ]

I was in the Philipenes about 2 years ago to study English. I stayed there for 2 months.

I thought I would rather die before going there because I heard that it was so dangerous, but I chose it because of the price, and I had never been there before so I wanted to try it.

When I arrived in the Philippines and went to the ESL school there were completely new views that I had never seen before.

I was kind of shocked about their lot. It also felt more humid than I had expected.

My first room-mates were Korean and I was happy because I love Korea.

However I faced in difference in culture between Korea and Japan. For example, our school's rule was if we used air conditioning over much we would have to pay extra for it, so was I really careful to save electricity but my Korean roommates were untroubled although they might have to pay more, so I told them my concerns but finally they couldn't understand me.

I changed my room mate with a Japanese room mate who also tried to save electricity.

I thought it was only me that cared about that and found out that it was. Most Koreans in our school didn't care about paying the extra electricity fee.

I thought it was really interesting because most Japanese were frugal.

battery dies. Stopped here. Very well written!

I think there is no correction, pay for comfortable or not. I think Japanese think "extra fee" is really waste of money but Korean think that priority is feeling so they don't think that is "waste".

I felt it was very good opportunity that I could know about Korean culture more.

Besides, I hang out with Korean friends many times and tried to go to many places in the Philippines, then I realized that there was actually not so dangerous than I expected, rather I really like there and now, I really want to go back there again.

Many people are kind and funny!

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