A little rabbit
A little rabbit went outside
From its hill's little hole.
There was a field,
A day was bright
And field was crossed quick.
And then was forest
In the dark
And rabbit was alone.
It went careful
Tried not to see
At terriblre big eyes.
It came to sea.
The sea was calm
And day came up to end.
It dug a hole
And fell asleep
And never walked again.
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A little rabbit
A little rabbit went outsideFrom its hill's little hole.
There was a field,
A day was bright
And the field was crossed quick.
And then was the forest
In the dark
And rabbit was alone.
It went carefully
Tried not to see
At terriblre big eyes.
It came to the sea.
The sea was calm
And the day came to an end.
The rabbit dug a hole
And fell asleep
And never walked again.
Hey Alexey, your English is clearly good if you are capable of writing a comprehensible poem like this in the language. I hope that my corrections did not change what you were trying to convey with your poem. As you surely know, poems tend to break conventional and grammatical rules, so I tried my best to make corrections while also recognizing that this is a poem and that maybe your way of phrasing certain ideas was purposeful. In any case, keep up the great work!
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Wrote myself. I'm not Shakespeare, of course, but this is my first poem in English. :) Does it have any grammar errors?
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Is this a poem that you tried to translate to English?
Or is it something that you wrote yourself?
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