Family meals
I have two sisters and one brother so I really enjoy meeting with them to eat every Sunday in our parent’s house in summer. My father usually makes a bbq. If the weather is nice, we often eat outside so we have a good time together.
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Family Meals
I have two sisters and one {=a}* brother so I really enjoy meeting getting together** with them to eat every Sunday in our parent’s {parents'(?)}*** house in summer. My father usually makes a bbq {better written out as barbecue}. If the weather is nice, we often eat outside so we have a good time together {and enjoy the sun/weather}****.*It sounds more natural to say "two sisters and a brother".
**"Meeting with someone" is more for business or transactions. We meet with a real estate agent, but we get together with family and friends.
***If it's just your father, then "parent" is okay. If it's both, than "parents' house."
****The sentence is okay, but there was not an obvious correlation between the "nice weather" clause and the "having a good time", so it needs something to tie the two ideas together like "and enjoy the sun."
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