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It is a great pity that I did not come back last night. I have never realized that my gardenia would be so badly ill. I got home at 2pm, to my surprise, there were so many yellow leaves instead of flowers. What's wrong with my gardenia? I was so sad.
There was slight fragrance giving out the buds. But it did not bloom.
I will take it to the "doctor" tomorrow, whom I bought the gardenia from. I wish he could help me to save my gardenia.
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My gardenia is badly ill. %>_%>_
It is a great pity that I did not come back last night. I would never have realized that my gardenia would be so badly ill. I got home at 2pm. To my surprise, there were so many yellow leaves instead of flowers. What's wrong with my gardenia? I was so sad.
The buds were giving out a slight fragrance. (I changed the word order to make the buds the subject not the object of the verb - giving out). But it did not bloom.
I will take it to the "doctor" tomorrow, whom (whom is old-fashioned, most people just say who nowadays) I bought the gardenia from. I hope he can help me to save my gardenia.
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Sunny is so cute. :)
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