My favorite photo
My favorite photo is about a trip to Rio de Janeiro to where I participated of one event called World Youth Day in 2013. I was with other five friends, this was my best trap. It was terrific I was among thousands of peoples with deafferents nationalities. Walking with my friends we run into with a group of Mexicans, they were singing, talking, were really happy, some people held flags and used big hats on them head. I did not speak Spanish very well, but I tried to communicate with one of them. I asked to him if he could lend me his hat and flag to take a photo, he merrily did not hesitate and gave me the objects. So my friends took the photo, I was funny using that hat and I felt amazing, because I had contact with another culture. This really worth it.
Every time I look this photo I remember of this event, where I met a lot of differents people, and realized how Mexicans are nice and welcoming.
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My favorite photo
My favorite photo is about from a trip to Rio de Janeiro in 2013 to where I participated of in an one event called World Youth Day in 2013. I was with other five friends, this was my best trap trip. It was terrific, I was among thousands of peoples people with of deafferents different nationalities. When I was walking with my friends we run into with a group of Mexicans, they were singing, talking, and were really happy. Some people held flags and used had big hats on them their heads. I did not speak Spanish very well, but I tried to communicate with one of them. I asked to him if he could lend me his hat and flag to take a photo, he merrily did not hesitate and merrily gave me the objects. So my friends took the photo, I it was funny using that hat and I felt amazing, because I had contact with another culture. This really was worth it.Every time I look at this photo I remember of this event, where I met a lot of differents people, and realized how Mexicans are nice and welcoming.
This is a really good piece of writing, the mistakes are common mistakes learners often make. Keep up the good work!
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