My Story with hockey according reality
The story started at work. I worked long time and I was exhausted. When I had days off so I wanted enjoy time and have rest. I decided that I will ice skating with my boyfriend on reservoir.
I am beginner on skating. When I stood on ice, I felt nervous and I didn't have balance. After five minutes I skated better. Then I skated beautifully for thirty minutes.
Finally my boyfriend got idea. We could play hockey. He gave me a bough like hockey-stick. He threw a nob like a puck to me. At the moment I impersonated to the best hockey player like Jaromír Jágr. When I had the nob near my skate, I didn't have balance and fell on the ice. My hand stayed under my backside. I felt very strong pain in hand. My boyfriend came me and helped me stand up and go away from the ice. It is finish with story. Second day I went at the doctor. He said that it is fractured.
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My true hockey story
The story started at work. I had been working a long time and was exhausted. When I had some days off I wanted to enjoy my time and relax, so I decided that I will ice skate with my boyfriend on the reservoir.I am a beginner in skating. When I stood on the ice, I felt nervous and I did not balance well. After five minutes I skated better. Then I skated beautifully for thirty minutes.
Finally my boyfriend had an idea. We could play hockey. He gave me a bough like hockey-stick. He threw a nob like a puck to me. At that moment I impersonated the best hockey player, Jaromír Jágr. When I had the nob near my skate, I toppled over and fell on the ice. My hand caught under my backside. I felt a very strong pain in my hand. My boyfriend came and helped me stand up and get off the ice. That was that. The next day I went to the doctor who said that it was fractured.
very well written!
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