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Spring allergy in Japan It's a warm day today, even though it's so cold last week. A lot of people love spring season. because it isn't so hot as well as so cold. I also like spring, but there is a lot of pollen come to the city side from the mountain and a lot of people catch a hay fever. Hay fever is a kind of an allergy, especially in spring. I love spring if we don't catch a hay fever.

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Spring allergies in Japan.

It's a warm day today, even though it was so cold last week. A lot of people love the spring season.

because it isn't so hot as well as so cold. (Instead, I would say; "The weather is mild right now")  I also like spring, but there is a lot of pollen that comes to the city side from the mountain and a lot of people catch a have hay fever. (To catch a cold, is okay, but you don't catch hayfever because its something you have, or don't have) 
Hay fever is a kind of an allergy, that is common in spring. I love spring if my hayfever isn't so bad.



Notes - 

* Because does not come after a full stop/period, eg.

I like dogs. Because,....   NO! 

I like dogs because ... OKAY!

I like dogs, because... OKAY!


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Well done. I get hayfever too. Even my dog used to get it. Eating some honey every day helps. 


Spring allergy in Japan

It's a warm day today, even though it's so cold last week. A lot of people love the spring season because it isn't too hot or too cold. I also like spring, but there is a lot of pollen that comes to the city from the mountain and a lot of people have hay fever.
Hay fever is an allergy, especially in spring. I would love spring if we didn't get hay fever.

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