Role of technology ( please make corrections)!!

It is true that technology plays a pivotal role in the development of the future. It effectively reduces the cost of tasks through the use of technology tools. For example, a few years back sending a message to someone was very difficult but once the internet market emerged, people were able to send a messages within the seconds using tools such as Gmail, outlook etc. Also, technology has contributed by enabling online transactions thus replacing the very cumbersome process of spending time in the long queues for transactions.
Technology impacts the social good will and improved prolific. ???? (I don't know what u mean by this sentence) However, the market is also impacted in terms of employment and the reduction of various of posts in industry. For instance, the telecommunications industry has reduced the cost of the transportation industry because people communicate over the telephone instead of traveling. It is happening in the other industries similarly.
Technology is becoming of prime importance to all facets of human life. This is apparent from the regular access to technology tools such as twitter and Facebook by common people. These social platforms create a virtual world which sometimes acts as a buttress for an otherwise devastated situation.
Thus, technology is pivotal to the productivity of people and create a lot of learning opportunities, but simultaneously, it makes some situations worse such as the reduction in  employment.