Recently, my friend shared with me the experience of a party. I think it’s an interesting experience, so I’ll try to translate it into English. My mate Lara had a good placement last year and performed well during this placement, so she got this opportunitity to attent this party. She asked me whether attending it was a good idea or not, and I answered immediately, “why not？” Because I rarely attend this type of event, and I would like to broaden my horizon, on that day Lara and I went to this party. I don’t know lots of guests in this party, just know Cara hosted it and invited most of us. But Lara introduced me to this place, so that I could relax myself quickly. The MC was very funny and told some jokes to warm  the environment. There are different kinds of delicious dishes and soft drinks there. The first activity of the party is dancing, some men and women were dancing together in the circle area. I am not good at dancing, so I just sat there and watched them. A couple of people invited me to dance with her or him, but I was too shy and refused them with a sweet smile. At the end of this party, we played some games like drawing a raffle. The third prize was just book binder, and the second prize was a dozen bottles of beer, and the first prize was an ipad with 16 gigabytes. The Bonus prize is a T-shirt and an earphone. In the end, there were four winners, and each person won each prize. Unfortunatly, I won nothing except a losing raffle ticket. After the party, I took the train back home with Lara. On the way home, I thought in my mind, next time, if I attend some events like this, hopefully, I could hit the lottery and win a super prize.

Very good writing, very detailed and logical in the flow. It appears that you had fun and an experience you will remember for a while.

Recently, my friend told me about a party. I think it’s an interesting experience, so that's why I’ll try translating it into English. My mate Lara had a good placement last year and performed well during the placement, so she got an opportunity to attend the party. She asked me whether attending it is good or not. I answered immediately “why not？”, because I rarely went to this type of event, and I would like to broaden my horizon through it. On that day, Lara and I went to the party. I didn't know lots of guests in this party, I just know Cara hosted it and invited most of us. But Lara showed me this place so that I could relax quickly. The MC was very funny and told some jokes to warm the environment. There were different kinds of delicious dishes and soft drinks there. The first activity of party was dancing, some men and women were dancing together in the circle area. I am not good at dancing, so I just sat there and watched them. A couple of people invited me to dance with her/him, but I was too shy so I refused them with a sweet smile. At the end of the party, we played some games like drawing a raffle. The third prize was just a book binder, and the second prize was a dozen bottles of beer, and the first prize was an ipad with 16 gigabytes. The Bonus prize was a T-shirt and an earphone. In the end, there were four winners, and each person won a prize. Unfortunately, I won nothing but I lost a raffle ticket. After the party, I took the train back home with Lara. On the way to home, I thought, next time, if I attend some events like this, hopefully, I will hit the lottery and win a super prize.

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