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JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON Mar.9th I would like someone to correct my diary entry( or to tell me the natural way of saying some things below. But I would be glad even if you JUST CORRECT my entry) I was wondering if you could do that for me, please?

JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON Mar.9th

This time, I'm going to write down here about the sad news foe me. Yesterday, I heard from my boss that my one of co-woker is likely to quit his job. He is not just typical coworker for me, the same age as me, the same time when entering the company as me. Yes, I mean he is one of my colleague. But the time when he decide to quit job has come suddenly. And, actually, I don't know well why he want to quit. The only thing I can say about him is that his job might not suit him well because his appearance working doesn't look really funny. That's why I am thinking that he want to quit it. Oh, yeah, someday, I am planning to quit this job, too, but it is not the time to do that yet because I don't get to used to do work completely, and a lot of things I want to learn from my work are left. The time when I could quit my job is might when there is not the skill I have to learn from this job at all, in other word, when I learn everything the skills of the job. But anyway, it is sad for me that he is likely to quit this job. However, I hope him to do the best even if he could get the new job.

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JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON Mar.9th

I would like someone to correct my diary entry( or to tell me the natural way of saying some things below. But I would be glad even if you JUST CORRECT my entry) I was wondering if you could do that for me, please?

JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON Mar.9th

This time, I'm going to write down here about the some sad news. foe me. Yesterday, I heard from my boss that my one of co-workers is likely to quit his job. He is not just a typical coworker for me. He is the same age as me, entered the company the same time when entering the company as me. Yes, I mean he is one of my colleagues. But the time when he decided to quit his job has come  so suddenly. And,  Actually, I don't know well why he wants to quit. The only thing I can say about him is that his job might not suit him well because when he is working it doesn't look like he enjoys his job. his appearance working doesn't look really funny. That's why I am thinking that he wants to quit it. Oh yeah, someday I am planning to quit this job too, but it is not the time to do that yet because I don't get to used to do work completely, and there are a lot of things I still want to learn from my work are left. The time when I could quit my job is might be when there is not the skills I have left to learn from this job at all, in other word, when I learn everything all the skills of the job. But anyway, it is sad for me that he is likely to quit this job. However, I wish him the best I hope him to do the best even if he could get the when he gets a new job.

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JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON Mar.9th (writing about my co-worker) This time, I'm going to write about some sad news. Yesterday, I heard from my boss that my one of co-workers is likely to quit his job. He is not just a typical co-worker for me. He is the same age as me, the same time as me. Yes, I mean he is one of my colleagues. But he deiced to quit job suddenly. Actually, I don't know why he want to quit. The only thing I can say about him is that his job might not suit him well because when he is working it doesn't look like he enjoys his job. That's why I think that he want to quit. Oh yeah, someday I am planning to quit this job too, but it is not the time to do that yet because a lot of things I want to learn from my work. The time when I could quit my job might be when there is no skills I have left to learn from this job at all, in other word, when I learn all the skills of the job. But anyway, it is sad from that he is likely to quit this job. However, I wish him the best even when he gets a new job.

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