Essay "We have become too dependent on technology"
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we have become too dependent on technology
Nowadays we have a lot of discoveries in technology that can make our life much easier, so you are supposed to use technology to be comfortable and happy with your life. But what would happen, if we did not have it? Was it true that we have become obsessed with it and could not live without?
I think it is true, that people depend on technology, but I don't agree that it is actually a bad thing. In my opinion it is appropriate that we use what we have and it is never too much, when we talk about our convenience. We live in modern world, so we are supposed to use technology and cannot escape this in any case. All the matters use it properly and do not be obsessed.
On the other hand, it is argued that people now are too much benefit from technology, so they are almost can't do some simple things by themselves, for example, laundry or washing dishes.
Despite my respect for this opinion, I cannot share it because I'm sure that people nowadays basically don't need to know how to do those things, because we have technology in our lives. And anyway to do this kind of homework there is no need to have special skills, people just didn not use to do it, so they can easily learn how it's done, if there is any necessity.
In conclusion, counts all advantages and disadvantages, I would prefer to stand in my opinion, because i still believe that depending on technology are good for our life so people just need to use it relevantly.
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We Have Become Too Dependent on Technology [In titles always capitalize the first, last, and all important words]
Nowadays we have a lot of discoveries in technology that can make our life much easier, so you are supposed to use technology to be comfortable and happy with your life. But what would happen, if we did not have it? Is it true that we have become obsessed with it and could not live without?I think it is true, that people depend on technology, but I don't agree that it is actually a bad thing. In my opinion it is appropriate that we use what we have, and it is never too much when we talk about our convenience. We live in a/the modern world, so we are supposed to use technology and cannot escape this in any case. All that matters is to use it properly and do not be obsessed.
On the other hand, it is argued that people now are benefiting too much from technology, so they almost can't do some simple things by themselves, for example, laundry or washing dishes.
Despite my respect for this opinion, I cannot share it because I'm sure that people nowadays basically don't need to know how to do those things, because we have technology in our lives. And anyway, to do this kind of housework there is no need to have special skills, people use to do it, so they can easily learn how it's done, if there is any necessity.
In conclusion, counting all advantages and disadvantages, I would prefer to stand on my opinion, because I still believe that depending on technology is good for our life so people just need to use it relevantly.
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