My day

Today I met my best friend and we went to the post office to take my order-microphone. to pick up the microphone I ordered. (Is this what you mean? If not, let me know!)

It was really hard to compare put all the parts together and adjust the sound, but I did it.

When we were going home we took some pictures. I think they are pretty good.

Then we watched a film. It is called "Million". It was so strange )0
(For more flow, you might simply write: Then we watched a film called "Million".)

When my friend left I processed the photos and posted a couple on my profile on Instagram.

My day

Today i met with my best friend and we went to the post office to take my ordered-microphone.

It was really hard to compare all the parts together and to adjust the sound,but i made it.

When while we were going to home ,we took some pictures,i think they are pretty good.

Then we watched a film.The film's name  was It is called "Million". It was so strange )0 ?

When my friend left i processed the photos and posted a couple on my profile in instagram.

Maybe need more checking.I found only these mistakes

Today i met my best friend and we went to the post office to get  a microphone  i ordered  online .

It was really hard to gather  all the parts together and adjust the sound,but i made it.

When we were going home we took some pictures,i think they are pretty good.

Then we watched a film. It's  called "Million". It was so strange )0

When my friend left i processed the photos and posted a couple on my profile on instagram.

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