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2018.03.09 It is Friday today. And I feel tired and updset.

I like writting when I am moody, so you might feel I am a sad person.

I work hard, and i don't get good salary. I am lazy to change. Lazy to find another opportunity.

I am in the circle hating myself. Yes, I hate myself.

I can't make new friend. I can't get interested in others. That is too bad.

That really upsets me.

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2018.03.09 (In America we say March 3, 2018 or 03.09.2018)

It's Friday today and I feel tired and upset.

I like writing when I am moody, so you might think I'm a sad person.

I work hard, and I don't make a lot of money. I'm too lazy to change and to find another job.

I'm in the circle(I don't know what circle means in this context) hating myself. Yes, I hate myself.

I can't make new friends. I can't get interested in others. It's so bad.

It really upsets me.

At least in America we use a lot of contractions and the letter i will be capitalized always when it's by itself. Also, you shouldn't hate yourself, because everyone goes through hard times in their life. You just need to find the strength and confidence to move forward. You only live once, so live it the way you want to live it and not how others want you to live. 

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Thanks Andrew.
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Don't worry darling. It's okay. Everything will be perfect. Don't be upset it disappoints me.

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