Hello world!
So, let's start! This is my first note. I fear that I will give it up after first correction, because I ashamed. But I must try it. Everyone doing mistakes, right? So, I dreamed up my note concept. I want to write about my work and about users. Sometimes, I will use the sarcasm. But, you know, in every good joke there's a part of truth! I think it would be great to exchange experience and observations .So, I work a system administrator, and I often seen that people have a persecution complex! They always ask me about data safety. They closed their web camera by scotch tape. They clean the history on browser and history of chatting. All of them fear that FSB spied. But they don't care that they kept file with internet bank passwords on the desktop. And when I sit down for their PC, they don't close personal chat window. I was shouting "Wake up! I can see your intime life!". But I heard only two answer. "You are the haсker. You already know everything." or "I trust you, because I know you". I'm not a hacker, and I won't use other people's secrets. However, this is only my life principle. I known the system administrators who was stealing money and blackmailing users! Please be careful, don't trust system administrator! Trust the FSB, they are not so bad!
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So, let's start! It my first note. I fear that I will give it up after first correction, because I feel ashamed( Totally unfounded, unnecessary, and groundless in my opinion, I can't tell you how you should feel but I like this.) But I must try it. Everyone makes mistakes, right? So, I dreamed up my note concept. I want to write about my work and about users. Somethimes, I will use the sarcasm. But, you know, in every good joke there's a part of truth! I think it would be great to exchange experience and observations .So, I work as a system administrator, and I have often seen that people have got a persecution complex! They always ask me about data safety. They closed their web camera by scotch tape. They clean the history on browser and history of chatting. All of them fear the FSB spies. But they don't care that they kept the file with their internet bank passwords on the desktop. And when I sit down to their PC, they don't close their personal chat window. I am shouting "Wake up! I can see your intimit life!". But I hear only two answers. "You are the haсker. You already know everything." or "I trust you, because I know you". I'm not a hacker, and I won't use other people's secrets. But this is my life principle. I know of system administrators who will steal money and blackmail users! Please be carefull, don't trust system administrators! Trust the FSB, they are not so bad!
Again I must say it is good. Easy to read and understand and it is admirable your stance of abusing your position and I removed your only because your beliefs are not just "only."
Again I must say it is good. Easy to read and understand and it is admirable your stance of abusing your position and I removed your only because your beliefs are not just "only."
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Hello world!
So, let's start! This is my first note. I fear that I will give up after the first correction because I am so ashamed*. But I must try it. Everyone is making mistakes, right? So, I dreamed up my note concept. I want to write about my work and about users. Sometimes I will use sarcasm, but you know, in every good joke there's a grain of truth! I think it would be great to exchange experiences and observations. So, I work as a system administrator and I often see people with a persecution complex! They always ask me about data safety. They cloak their web camera by scotch tape. They clean the history on their browser and their chat history. All of them fear the FSB is spying on them. But they don't care that they keep a file with internet bank passwords on their desktop. And when I sit down at their PC, they don't close their personal chat window. I was shouting "Wake up! I can see your private life!". But I heard only two answers: "You are the haсker. You already know everything." and, "I trust you because I know you". I'm not a hacker, and I won't use other people's secrets. However, this is only my own conscience. I have known system administrators who were stealing money and blackmailing users! Please be careful, don't trust system administrators! Trust the FSB, they are not so bad!*no need to be. You are a beginner and it is normal to make mistakes. They do not trouble anyone else, so you shouldn't be troubled by them. Besides, after this is marked, everyone will have forgotten it 10 minutes later (except you, I hope, who will learn from my corrections!!).
Very well written!
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So, let's start! It's my first note. I fear that I will give it up after the first correction, because I am ashamed of it . But I must try it. Everyone does mistakes, right? So, I dreamt up my note concept. I want to write about my work and about users.Sometimes, I will use the sarcasm. But, you know, in every good joke there's a part of truth! I think it would be great to exchange experience and observations .So, I work as a system administrator, and I often see that people have got a persecution complex! They always ask me about data safety. They always cover their web camera by scotch tape. They more often clean the history on their browser and their chatting history . All of them fear that FSB spies on them . But they don't care that they keep files of their bank accounts passwords on the desktop. And when I sit down in frontier of their PCs, they don't close personal chat windows. I was shouting "Wake up! I can see your intimate life!". But I heard only two answer. "You are a haсker. You already know everything." or "I trust you, because I know you". I'm not a hacker, and I won't use other people's secrets. But this is only my life principle. I've known some system administrators who were stealing money and blackmailing users! Please be carefull, don't trust system administrators! Trust the FSB, they are not so bad!
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Everyone makes mistakes, right. You are so right and not only that but making mistakes is a positive thing for a number of reasons. 1. Making a mistake means one is trying.
2. Mistakes are an opportunity to learn. Evalute them objectively and think how can I improve. Evalute them shamefully and one will simply want to confine them to the darkest regions of their mind and wish them gone.
3. If one knows everything then what are schools and other learning establishments for. We learn in safe environment where we can try new things and learn new ways.
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