The rule of my father in my life
Actually, I can not write all of sacrifies that my father have done for me. Since i was young, He was like my hero, Protect me from the evil friend when my first day entering my school. Everyday he always deliver me to my school in the morning and fecth me in the afternoon. moreover, He doesn't care about the weather, Even if it was raining, At that time, We have not car yet, And he prefer to drive me during the raining but He always do all of his effort to protect me from wet. Conquently he suffer and touch raining to protect me. This is the beautiful experience that i had feel with my father, i promise, I never forget this happen.[emoji] year by year passed, and niw i grew u and become a strong and beautiful woman because of my father. All of the things that i write are just a tiny things from the huge things that you have done for me, your effor to take care of me.me.even if my ink have finish, Its still not enough to write all of your kind. Thank you my father [emoji][emoji]
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Hi Saima! Beautiful writing about your father :) I have made some corrections for you below. Let me know if you have any questions!
Actually, I can not write all of the sacrifices that my father has made for me. Since I was young, he was like my hero. He protected me from an evil friend on my first day at school. Every day he always took me to my school in the morning and fetched me in the afternoon. Moreover, he doesn't care about the weather, even if it's raining. At the moment we don't have a car, but he prefers to drive me when it rains. He always makes a lot of effort to protect me from the rain. Consequently, he suffers the rain to protect me. This is the beautiful experience that I had with my father. I promise I will never forget that these things happened.[emoji] Years have passed, and now I have grown up and become a strong and beautiful woman because of my father. All of the things that I have written are just tiny things compared to the huge things that you have done for me and your effort to take care of me. Even if my ink has finished, I wouldn't have enough to write about all of your kindness. Thank you my father [emoji][emoji]Want to progress faster?
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