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Getting a car. I bought a car a few months ago, the question is; do I need it? Well I think I do, I decided to buy a car because I became a dad 6 months ago and found very difficult to travel with a buggy, for example sometimes We go to my partner’s cousin place, they live 40 minutes drive away from our place and go there by train becomes one and a half hour journey, apart from that it is the the fact of taking a few buses and changing a few lines of the train too. So doing this by train it is annoying, and don’t even mention when my partner has to do this journey by her herself with our baby when I am at work, some of the train stations don’t even have lifts so it makes even harder, then she has had some situations where she has ended up having some nasty arguments with some people because of the buggy area on the bus. Then another good reason about having a car is that my parents usually visit us so we can just drive to the airport to pick them up or drop them off, this way my partner, my baby and I can we all go to see them at the airport. I have no idea if that would be possible by bus, I mean I don’t know if I can take my little baby with me on the bus, maybe I need a baby car seat, I am not sure about this to be honest, anyway. Apart from all these things that I have just mentioned having a car will give us the freedom to go some places that we don’t know yet when the weather allows us. I have to say that if I hadn’t had my baby I would not have bought a car, basically because I would not mind going anywhere even if it would take very long to get to my destination. Thank you very much for reading my text and for your corrections. Cheers.

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Getting a car.

I bought a car a few months ago, the question is; do I need it?
Well, I think I do, I decided to buy a car because I became a dad 6 months ago and found it very difficult to travel with a buggy. For example, sometimes we go to my partner’s cousin's place. They live a 40-minute drive away from our place and going there by train becomes one and a half hour journey, apart from that is the fact of needing to change a few buses and a few lines of the train as well.
So doing this by train it is annoying, and don’t even mention when my partner has to do this journey by her herself with our baby when I am at work. Some of the train stations don’t even have lifts so it makes it even harder. Then she has had some situations where she has ended up having some nasty arguments with some people because of the buggy area on the bus.
Then Another good reason to have a car is that my parents usually visit us so we can just drive to the airport to pick them up or drop them off. This way my partner, my baby and I can we all go to see them at the airport. I have no idea if that would be possible by bus, I mean I don’t know if I can take my little baby with me on the bus, maybe I need a baby car seat. I am not sure about this to be honest, anyway. Apart from all these things that I have just mentioned having a car will give us the freedom to go some places that we don’t know yet when the weather allows us.
I have to say that if I hadn’t had my baby I would not have bought a car, basically because I would not mind going anywhere even if it would take very long to get to my destination.
Thank you very much for reading my text and for your corrections.
Cheers.

Some sentences you had have too many commas. There is no need for this. Finish them with a full stop and start a new sentence.
Also, note that buggy/push chair is more common for British English.
"Stroller"  more common in American English.

Cheers!

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